Improve Your Presentation — Sep 24th

People liked your talk…
so why didn’t they book?

You gave the presentation. They clapped. Then nothing happened. In 60 minutes, we find exactly where your message is leaking — between the invite, the talk, and the booked call — and what to fix first.

Save My Seat for Sep 24th Free · 60 minutes · Online
Who it’s for: insurance providers, estate planners, dentists, chiropractors, and acupuncturists who use presentations to get clients
7 out of 8 attendees now book a call — up from 3 in 10 — same room, same audience, just a clearer message.
Kiwi presenting at a BNI Successful Synergies workshop

A good talk is not the same as a booked call.

Somewhere between someone hearing about your event and becoming a client, the message leaks. Most people blame the talk. It’s almost never the talk.

01
Invite
Leak: nobody registers
→
02
Show Up
Leak: they register but don’t attend or engage
→
03
Raise Hand
Leak: they like it but don’t ask for more
→
04
Become a Client
The goal

This Sep 24th ‘s training: we find which of these four stages your message is leaking at, and give you the exact words to fix it — before you give your next talk.

Sound familiar?

I keep giving talks, but nobody books.
People say “great presentation” and then nothing happens.
I don’t know what to say in my 30-second pitch.
I’m tired of guessing where my message is leaking.
I get referrals that go nowhere.
I’m wasting time and money on rooms that don’t convert.
Kiwi teaching the Pains, Fears, Hopes, Dreams framework at a BNI workshop
Teaching the Pains / Fears / Hopes / Dreams framework live at a BNI workshop.

What we cover Sep 24th

Three teaching points. No fluff, no theory you can’t use the same week.

01

Find the leak

Where exactly your message is losing people — invite, RSVP, opening, CTA, or follow-up.

02

Use the buyer’s words

Why repeating your prospect’s own language back to them creates trust faster than any pitch.

03

Make the next step obvious

The exact call-to-action structure that turns “great talk” into a booked call.

Kiwi teaching call-to-action structure at a workshop, whiteboard reads CTA = Yes
Breaking down the exact CTA structure, live.
Kiwi presenting at a workshop
Who’s Teaching This

Kiwi Kiwimagi — Maximize My Message

In the past 15 years, I’ve studied and taught public speaking. I’ve stood in a room I rented myself, watched one person show up out of the fifty I expected, and walked away with nothing. I know exactly what it costs to guess instead of diagnose — this workshop is the fix I built for myself, now built for you.

15years teaching public speaking
$63K+booked business from presentations, past year
Business owners at a BNI Wealth Partners workshop

This is for you if:

  • You’re an insurance provider, estate planner, dentist, chiropractor, acupuncturist, or similar professional who gives presentations, seminars, or talks to get clients
  • People compliment your talk but don’t book
  • You’re guessing at your pitch instead of testing it
  • You want a next step, not another hour of theory

This isn’t for you if:

  • You generate business through door-to-door, canvassing, or trade work rather than scheduled presentations
  • You’re looking for a Facebook/Google ads course
  • You want a passive webinar to watch on replay, not apply
An engaged audience during a Kiwi Coaching workshop
57%of the room asked to book a call
One client was closing roughly a quarter of his room after his talks. After two sessions changing his opening and his call-to-action, one workshop hit 57% asking to book a call with him — same room size, same audience, clear message.

“I’ve gone from about 30% of the people saying ‘contact me’ — my last class, I had seven out of eight say, ‘Kiwi, I want you to work with me.’ That literally doubles my income from no extra cost on how I’m getting clients.”

— Gabe Reinhardt, Medicare Workshops

“I couldn’t answer two questions: what problem do I solve, and who do I solve it for. Kiwi gave me a simple step-by-step process — in just 10 minutes, I had over 100 people message me wanting to work with me.”

— Eddie Villa, Unleash Your Strengths

“Not only is Kiwi a wonderful public speaker, but he really got people’s wheels turning and encouraged lots of engagement throughout. People left with good tools and were better able to communicate their business effectively.”

— Samantha Balk, President, Successful Synergies BNI

“We were having issues with confidence in our 30-second elevator pitch and how we represent our business. Kiwi came in and gave a class on how to present ourselves and our businesses in the best way — definitely helped us out.”

— Dallas Hidalgo, President, Summit Power Partners BNI

Save your seat for Sep 24th

Sep 24th. Online (Zoom). 12 pm MT. Bring your own lunch — this one’s online, so no traffic required.

Every presentation you give without knowing where it’s leaking is a room you don’t get back.

Common questions

Is this a disguised sales pitch?

No. You’ll leave with something you can use in your very next talk whether or not you ever talk to me again. There’s no card required and no package pitch waiting at the end. If it’s a fit to go further, I’ll say so — no pressure either way.

Do I need to already be giving talks or workshops?

Ideally yes — this is built for people already using presentations, BNI talks, or workshops to get clients. If you’re just getting started, you’ll still get value, but the fixes land faster if you have a talk to apply them to.

Is it recorded if I can’t make it live?

Yes — register anyway and you’ll get the replay plus an invite to the next available session.

How long is it, and how often does it run?

60 minutes, live, online, every Sep 24th . Bring a talk, pitch, or workshop you’re currently giving — we’ll work with real material, not hypotheticals.

Stop guessing why they didn’t book.

Find the leak this Sep 24th .

The opportunity is in front of you.

The opportunity won’t wait.

So take. This. Opportunity.

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